Review Detail of Simon_Pelle_Hansen in Dungeon of Pride, Laplace

You’re either gonna love it or hate it. Personally I hate it but not because it’s bad (well it is bad, but I have seen way worse so can’t be to judgy), but more because it isn’t what I wanted it to be. I got to chapter 180 and then I couldn’t anymore. It feels slow and I feel like a lot that is described could essentially be trimmed or skipped. Maybe that is because the first 20-30 chapters are pretty fast paced with time skips and then that just stops, which makes the story feel slow imo. (Spoiler) My explanation of the plot from what I read of the story: (spoiler) MC was someone who made games then died after working on his newest game for 1 year. He is reborn as a demon in a pretty standard fantasy setting and starts building his dungeon. He is given a system with the same name as his game and also is an inheritor of the sin of pride. Action scenes are either boring and dragged out of almost just skipped. Romance is, well, nonexistent or just so plain it might as well not be there.