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Review Detail of TheAmbrosius in Dungeon of Pride, Laplace

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TheAmbrosius
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Despite being over 500 chapters in length you get the feeling the author has barely scratched the surface of what is possible. So even though I'm making this review now I still consider this in the beginning stages. Without further ado, let's begin... WRITING QUALITY: -Overall the quality is legible meaning accurate grammar and sentence structure most of the time. How do you know that your reading is poor? One way is because of the need to read over the text you just read not because of its complexity or depth but because you didn't grasp what the author is trying to convey. You won't need to worry about this. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -The author as far as I can tell never stayed in the double digits for weekly releasing nor dropped below 4 chapters for long if at all. This is a sign showing the author's desire to stick at it for the long run compared to the amount released I find this a better gauge of stability. Basically, the author so far has not given us a reason to doubt. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -The short answer is you always find yourself coming back for more. The longer answer is the beginning you are brought to some of the highest peaks of power which shows the vast gap between where the MC is now and the progress to be made from the bottom. With his dungeon as a center point, you see the characters venture out exploring the world similar to a character in a game bringing color to grey areas. This is a deliberate decision the author has made compared to other stories that have the MCs base of operations move with him while he scales the ladder of power. Neither is inherently better just more of a preference this author shows. -Not only do you see the MC develop the story being the one we follow but also many side characters and future villains scheming in the background giving you a foreshadowing of events to come. Overall great job. CHARACTER DESIGN: -The author does a masterful job of making sure each character is fleshed out so they add to the MC and the greater plot. Everyone close to the MC has a distinct personality, side characters you meet along the way regardless of duration feel like real people, and the villains are good villains in the sense they make you root for the MC and his companions. -Many people who don't like harem have legitimate concerns that those characters will either be useless or take away from the greater plot. You don't need to worry about this because so far the author has eluded to a few potential harem members however the plot demands your full attention so romance is not the center but instead the byproduct of a compelling story you read unfold. -Another concern many readers have is stories that have harem members surrounding the MC lack other companions which works sometimes while other times it leaves the reader wanting. I would say you are given a myriad of companions helping the MC, hindering the MC, and being there to flesh out the world. WORLD BACKGROUND: -As I wrote earlier the beginning does an excellent job of showing how vast the world is and how much potential the author can use to develop the story and characters. As the story progresses the MC is shown more of the world that seems never-ending which reminds me of peeling back the layers of an onion trying to find the nonexistent core. -The background is tied in obvious and mysterious ways to the MC letting you make your own judgments while giving you more bit by bit proving how much and little you really know so far. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough. Give it try if you're looking for quality content.

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Dungeon of Pride, Laplace

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Zekken_9955
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Can you please tell me if there's any NTR, Yuri, or Rape? its really devastating to find out later when reading it.

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kanekiUchiha25
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Great review,your use of Grammer and your level of vocabulary ensures that you'll write a good novel, whenever you have the need to do so

Zekken_9955
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and please list the current harem members too. I'd be very grateful.

TheAmbrosius
TheAmbrosiusLv15TheAmbrosius

I’m not up to date but I’m close. So far 2 are in the running to become harem members. No relationships have been formed. It reminds me of eastern fantasy novels that were popular before regular people started making their own. Hope that helps.

Zekken_9955:and please list the current harem members too. I'd be very grateful.
Zekken_9955
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Hmm so 700+ chapters and no harem members? that seems too slow. Thanks for answering kind stranger.

TheAmbrosius:I’m not up to date but I’m close. So far 2 are in the running to become harem members. No relationships have been formed. It reminds me of eastern fantasy novels that were popular before regular people started making their own. Hope that helps.
TheAmbrosius
TheAmbrosiusLv15TheAmbrosius

I agree about the slow pace. What I would say in the novels defense is the main focus is on surviving the seemingly endless tribulations while romance is for now minor. The potential members are much stronger and older then him so the author is taking the route of building up strength first. Still doesn’t change the fact that it’s slow but the rest keeps me hooked for now.

Zekken_9955:Hmm so 700+ chapters and no harem members? that seems too slow. Thanks for answering kind stranger.