Review Detail of Uckerfay_12345 in My Children Are Fierce and Adorable!

Honestly, I like the setting the writing and overall idea. That being said the story never seams to progress and as a result nether do the characters. Forty chapters in and the main character is still in bed and almost nothing has happened. At the end of the day this story is about food not transmutation or even the children. The story has potential but if it is to really succeed then the writer needs to stop focussing on food and move on with the important things like world setting and character & story development.