Review Detail of LackOfLovelife in Transmigrated as a Ghost

So I tried really hard to continue on, but the way it was written sounds so unlively in my mind. The way it was written does not give life to the characters is what puts me off it. It has potential but once you read it, the words, the sentence construction gives off an impression that the writer does not have English as their first language. They used some deep words in the wrong time and ways. It's just awkward in a sense that it's not enjoyable to read, because It's like you are reading bible with wrong grammars and horrible sentence construction, in others words, boring, lifeless and truly unremarkable.