Review Detail of underfireandice in Revenge of the half-demon cultivator on his second life.

I based this story on my real-life gaming experience in, Journey to immortality xianxia game. I used to role-play with others in that game back then. This was my inspiration. I wondered what it would be like if this universe is real. Then I had to leave the game due to exams. However, as the third Corona wave struck my country and we are still under lockdown. So, my old inspiration haunted me and, here's the result. Most of these characters are based on in-game characters and my discord Xianxia fan friends. I asked their opinion about the characters they wanted to be if they become cultivators. With all that in my mind, I created this plot. (I already finished the storyline. All I have to do is writing. :D) I'm not a native English speaker+This is my first novel. Luckily my friends volunteered to proofread. So, hopefully, in the future, I will be able to create the picture I have in my mind, in a better way.

And, Thank you very much for your review. I really appreciate it. :D