Review Detail of StrangeOne101 in Dimensional Descent

While it is an enjoyable read for people that love power fantasies, there are a lot of issues with the novel. There is little to no proofreading in the novel at all. There is so many mistakes and misplaced words that you learn to read "what the author PROBABLY meant here". The power system in the world is very complex. While interesting, it's constantly changing and can be hard to keep up with. The characters are average. Most have no personality, and very few characters actually stay around in the novel. The ones that do, you don't hear from them very much I think if the author sorted out these issues, it would be pretty good. As of now, it's something that can pass the time if you don't invest too heavily