Review Detail of daoist_buttlover in Dimensional Descent

It’s a well-written book with nice details, but the plot feels pretty convoluted for no good reason. The pacing is jumpy and weird, and on 3 separate occasions I’ve had to double back and read old chapters to figure out what’s happening, which is something I don’t have to do for good books. Also, the main character isn’t likeable, which is an automatic F in my book.