May seem like hating but I'm speaking my point of view. First is the Grammar, it is just simply a monstrosity. You can barely understand what is going off and on several occasions I have lost track of what is happening. The Character design just isn't my kind of taste. He is basically an idiot, emotionless, bland and racist person. I've tried multiple times to connect with the character but I couldn't no matter what. Only the update and Story development is the best about the fanfic. If you can understand it then go ahead, I'm not saying you shouldn't. I've just wanted to give an explanation on my experience with the story.
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LIKEracism is everywhere,for example in india instead of race people are discriminated in caste or read about rwandan genocide, also chinese treatment of uigyrs,it's just amplified in usa where racism is only between colours or asians
Dizlat_ur:I only hear it in the USA
Herohero:I agree if the MC was not racist and is the grammar was improving this fanfiction would be a better quality🧐
Herohero:I agree if the MC was not racist and is the grammar was improving this fanfiction would be a better quality🧐
Yeah that’s the line that is being spoon fed to gullible people. Fact is Canada is equally racist to USA. I doubt there’s even one country that doesn’t have a large amount of racism.
Dizlat_ur:I only hear it in the USA
Duncan_Morin:Yeah that’s the line that is being spoon fed to gullible people. Fact is Canada is equally racist to USA. I doubt there’s even one country that doesn’t have a large amount of racism.