Review Detail of LongSongGolden in Polaris Black

This is simply an amazing novel. The story does move a bit slowly, and it can be hard at times keeping track of the Timeline, but it's never boring. The story is spectacular, it's an original character so everything is new without any weird future knowledge, but the main character is smart enough to compensate for that. It's very story focused, no Suddenly OP main character type stuff, and the writing does an amazing job at conveying the thoughts of a young pureblood wizard growing up and slowly breaking free of that strict pureblood ideology he was raised around. There is a nice mix of new characters and canon characters that the MC meets while going through school at Hogwarts and while some are a bit one dimensional, others are very well fleshed out and explored. The writing quality is very high, no real issues there from what I have seen. I think the only oddity is the lack of POV specifications, as there are some chapters that jump from the main style of following the MCs POV to following another characters for a half chapter or more, and you just sorta have to figure it out by reading further who it is. Not horrible, but a bit odd at first. Still, overall it's a very good novel and I hope it continues on for many chapters to come.