The writing is pretty good. The story is a mess. The MC starts off capable and independent, but the second they meet the ML they get dumber and dumber. The MC, a crossdressing man, tries to fake a royal pregnancy. A 10 year old would know that lie is going to fall apart immediately. The MC also becomes little more than a punching bag for the ML, becoming the end stages of an abusive relationship the first time the ML hurts them. It's hard to explain.
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