The MC isn't just naïve he is made stupid by design, it's something I see commonly from new or still learning authors, it's often done since it makes it much easier to make the MC do something stupid and create drama of some sort to push plot/character development. You see it here often with him doing something stupid that is then used to help push the plot along. My biggest issue is that this essentially has 2 MC's, one you follow for the first 550 chapters and then it gets pretty much randomly thrown away for the second one. I wish I was warned in advanced, I think this novel is pretty bad as is but I at least wouldn't have kept pushing through hoping it gets better if I know the first 550 chapters of following the "MC" was pretty much just following a side character.
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