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Kayle_Mighty
Kayle_MightyLv11yrKayle_Mighty

This mc is a moron. That's all I can say so far. He's so ignorant and the author doesn't even try to make him improve, he just gives him more things to be ignorant about. And what's with him being so obsessed with being secretive? Shouldn't be be trying to become a core disciple since he wants more freedom? He had the job cut short for him and yet he still refuses to do it, he's selling the pills instead of submitting a small amount of them to finish the test. I'm 100% sure the author left it like that so the mc can do some face slapping. It was even more obvious when he didn't start wearing new robes when he become the sect leaders disciple. Even more reinforced when he helped the Kong guy when his cauldron was about to explode and the other guy wanted to attack him. Mc held him up with his qi manipulation (something that's rare) and yet everyone just brushed if off like it's something normal.

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Szeth_son_Neturo
Szeth_son_NeturoLv3Szeth_son_Neturo

Did you teach yourself how to read, or how to do math? No, you even needed someone to teach you how to piss, now imagine that you are in a new world, where everything seems to work differently, and a single mistake can lead to death. Would you be able to teach yourself to cultivate without knowing what meridians even were, or would you explode due to attempting something beyond your level. The author uses “show don’t tell” to create world building, and has the main character be as clueless as us going In so that we are in the loop as to what is going on. Core deciples seem to have more freedom in most sects, however that’s never really the case, you have reached a level where everyone is beneath you, and gain ignorance for those around you. You gain responsibility that you would never even imagine as an outer sect deciple, and you are held more strictly to rules, the rules may be different than before, but they have even more dire consequences. You can say what you will, but I believe it was better to write the Mc like this than it is with most stories

Kayle_Mighty
Kayle_MightyLv1Kayle_Mighty

I'm done, this is irritating. This mc is literally a university student yet he acts like a child in Kindergarten. He needs to be spoonfed every little bit of information. How could someone like that possibly make it into a university? And more importantly, why does it seem like nobody cares about the fact that he's such an idiot, and spoon-feeds him all the time?