Review Detail of McKinleyG16 in Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

I will say this novel has a lot of potentials, I've read up to ch 180 and I can't anymore with how naive and ignorant the mc is, very slow-paced I feel like the novel is being fleshed out. Grammar is okay, world-building is getting there a lot of potential if the author retried it could be top 10 imo just needs more in all aspects. Great premise though!