Review Detail of Domme in Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

The strange mary sue mc and whacky humor just dont cut it for me. Idk what it is for me (male), but male and female chars written by female author (I think) just dont feel right. Ive yet read about an actual good male char written by a female author. Its very likely the same for females reading male written female chars. The cringe obession with choccy milk and stuff is just giga cringe imo.