Review Detail of potato_man in The Devourer of All
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just saying but I think you should but a space after the commas and full stops, it would make it more readable. I haven't read the novel yet, but I say the first chapter and just wanted to tell you.
The Devourer of All
Evil_Seeker
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and you need to work on editing your paragraphs as although the idea is interesting it is hard to read and isnt written properly but i hope you keep improving your work and then i will read you story.
Evil_Seeker:Thank you for the advice.