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Review Detail of F_E_X_A in In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

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Yea... I think I'm gonna need more Duoluo Dalu FF... It was the first Chinese manhua I read... And God... It was so Good... So much nostalgia.

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In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

EdwardElite

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Edward, Check the paragraph comments... There are some things u missed with the punctuations for Narrative, Inner Dialogue, and Actual Dialogue...

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also my first