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Sondre
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It’s a fun story, MC gets system point by provoking negative emotions in others, so he trolls people a lot. The system is integrated well, giving him abilites that fits with the world. So ninjutsu have to be a spirit ring ability, but physical abilities can be used without issue. The chapter are really short, because the translator is seperating them into two parts to increase chapter count. There are some words/ names that have not been translated right, like calling Madara as ‘master ban’ one time.

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In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

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Thanks for your feedback. I will try to correct my mistakes in the starting chapters.