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Here is my thought about this novel based on what I have read so far, Character: I do really like the characters due to they have different personalities from one another. Tristan and Trish as a character are very decent, especially they are distinct with another when comes to reacting on the situation. Another thing I like is the author creates a dialogue as if they are talking like a real human being on the character interaction and I appreciate that effort. World-Building: So far the world-building is quite fine for now or I can say it's alright. But, I believe the author can further more the world-building within the story or even the surroundings. Writing: Even though the writing is pretty smooth and can feel the flow, but there are also minor flaws. Such flaws are grammar placement and it's pretty small and easy to be fixed. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I would love to see more chapters. Thank you and keep up the good work!!

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thank youuuu 😊😇