Review Detail of BookDragonling in Chaos' Heir
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Disclaimer: I have enjoyed this story and like the premise but this is a complaining review. I still highly recommend giving this a try. These are just the problems I think exist and they haven't stopped me from continuing to read this. As I read this I come across a few critiques/personal opinions. 1. The human race is said to be spaceworthy and traveling to other planets, conquering or making alliances with other races. Yet throughout the story the scale never really feels like that is the case. It consistently feels like the only people in existence are the characters introduced 'on screen'. Ex. He is on a world where the race is said to have been in control of the entire planet and yet I never felt like there were more than a few dozen people living there. Most of the story takes place in training camps that barely seem to have any people. 2. His relationship with the alien woman, Liiza, has come to dominate at least half of the story and is tiring at this point to read about. It was interesting at first but now it is just repetitive. The story stopped being about the MC getting stronger and traveling the universe to find his enemy and now it's all about how he will do anything for his relationship. The relationship that multiple times in the story has been said to be 'toxic'. 3. I've noticed this in many stories. When an author wants to make his MC seem smarter or better they will make their superiors dumber or incompetent to lend credence to the MC. This happens here with the MC's military command. Someone in command should not be so flustered or easily persuaded by a teenage boy. Even if the said teenage boy has 'magical alien trauma' giving him OP powers and plot armor.
Chaos' Heir
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SujayPatra:Yet this novel has 4.9rating. i don't get it. Why other people keep rating 5star for this novel. Bruh feels like I'm seeing some bots making reviews. Only goods, nothing bad about the novel at all. Except this one and some few others.
Classless Ascension, Cultivation Chat Group, Paragon Of Sin, Grand Ancestral Bloodlines, Top Tier Providence, Supremacy Games, Oracle Paths, Cultivation Online... These are the novel im currently reading.. i didn't drop them atleast after reading till the latest chapter.
KaijinReign:can you recommend some good novels. seems like you have read a lot of them
Oh yeah Eve is botting for sure... Seriously? This is one of the top novels on this site and just because it didn't call out to you it's a botting novel? Did you even read and see the quality of the work? It's all positive because Chaos' Heir is really good.
SujayPatra:Classless Ascension, Cultivation Chat Group, Paragon Of Sin, Grand Ancestral Bloodlines, Top Tier Providence, Supremacy Games, Oracle Paths, Cultivation Online... These are the novel im currently reading.. i didn't drop them atleast after reading till the latest chapter.
There is never going to be all Positive Reviews on a Novel. Atleast 10 in 100 person will hate it and review it with low star. But can you see any of those reviews here? No. That's why i said these is like bots are making reviews. Because I don't believe with 100k + readers even 10 can't dislike the novel?. If this is a novel with perfect story and everything, everyone has some interest towards it thn i would get the Missing of low star reviews. Yet i find something dislikble that are common for some people who dislike those kind of things in any novels. So i don't get it why there is no one point it out? Everyone saying it is perfect. They are just Feels like bots. I said "feels like it" . Not saying that the Author is really using bots.. maybe seeing this many positive reviews people who doesn't like it just don't bother to Give Reviews anymore. Because they will get hate from bootliking guys like you who thinks everything is perfect. Even we don't want anything perfect just don't like annoying things in novels.
StudentMan:Oh yeah Eve is botting for sure... Seriously? This is one of the top novels on this site and just because it didn't call out to you it's a botting novel? Did you even read and see the quality of the work? It's all positive because Chaos' Heir is really good.
I genuinely don't think it's botting BUT you are correct, there are abysmally low amounts of low star ratings so he's probably deleting them. I get that but I am also a critical person when it comes to stuff like this and I very much like this novel, there isn't a story that doesn't have flaws man. It just looks like to me the points you guys raise are nitpicking. I do not appreciate you calling me bootlicking, chief. I didn't insult you.
SujayPatra:There is never going to be all Positive Reviews on a Novel. Atleast 10 in 100 person will hate it and review it with low star. But can you see any of those reviews here? No. That's why i said these is like bots are making reviews. Because I don't believe with 100k + readers even 10 can't dislike the novel?. If this is a novel with perfect story and everything, everyone has some interest towards it thn i would get the Missing of low star reviews. Yet i find something dislikble that are common for some people who dislike those kind of things in any novels. So i don't get it why there is no one point it out? Everyone saying it is perfect. They are just Feels like bots. I said "feels like it" . Not saying that the Author is really using bots.. maybe seeing this many positive reviews people who doesn't like it just don't bother to Give Reviews anymore. Because they will get hate from bootliking guys like you who thinks everything is perfect. Even we don't want anything perfect just don't like annoying things in novels.
Sorry bro. But seeing things in the novel which is easily dislikble for many people and yet i came to see the review section to see everyone is calling this a perfect story with no flaws, all of them are mostly 5stars. This irritates me. Atleast someone should point out the negetive points of the novel.. yet there was none.. every novel has flaws but those novels also has reviews which point out the flaws. This is what i din't get in this review section.
StudentMan:I genuinely don't think it's botting BUT you are correct, there are abysmally low amounts of low star ratings so he's probably deleting them. I get that but I am also a critical person when it comes to stuff like this and I very much like this novel, there isn't a story that doesn't have flaws man. It just looks like to me the points you guys raise are nitpicking. I do not appreciate you calling me bootlicking, chief. I didn't insult you.
This story might have some problems, but is still, by far, the best story on the site. The points in this review are in some a way true, but its also about the fact that you do not tell the story, you show the story (something 99% of stories on webnovel dont do), so if Khan does not come into contact with it then we do not "see" it, especially because author does not do other pov's very often. it unrevals through the character, its not told to you. The Liiza arc is a bit too long I agree but its also a corner stone of the story. If this publishes on Amazon it gets a very solid 4.5 to 4.7. On webnovel it should get a 6.
SujayPatra:Yet this novel has 4.9rating. i don't get it. Why other people keep rating 5star for this novel. Bruh feels like I'm seeing some bots making reviews. Only goods, nothing bad about the novel at all. Except this one and some few others.
BenjiP:This story might have some problems, but is still, by far, the best story on the site. The points in this review are in some a way true, but its also about the fact that you do not tell the story, you show the story (something 99% of stories on webnovel dont do), so if Khan does not come into contact with it then we do not "see" it, especially because author does not do other pov's very often. it unrevals through the character, its not told to you. The Liiza arc is a bit too long I agree but its also a corner stone of the story. If this publishes on Amazon it gets a very solid 4.5 to 4.7. On webnovel it should get a 6.
KaijinReign:can you recommend some good novels. seems like you have read a lot of them
SujayPatra:Sorry bro. But seeing things in the novel which is easily dislikble for many people and yet i came to see the review section to see everyone is calling this a perfect story with no flaws, all of them are mostly 5stars. This irritates me. Atleast someone should point out the negetive points of the novel.. yet there was none.. every novel has flaws but those novels also has reviews which point out the flaws. This is what i din't get in this review section.
SujayPatra:Classless Ascension, Cultivation Chat Group, Paragon Of Sin, Grand Ancestral Bloodlines, Top Tier Providence, Supremacy Games, Oracle Paths, Cultivation Online... These are the novel im currently reading.. i didn't drop them atleast after reading till the latest chapter.
Well Among all of these novels i only Finished Top tier and it was one of my favourite novel.. Paragon of sin, supremacy Games, oracle paths these novels are great i like the story but there are too much filler thats why i kept them on hold until now and waiting for the novels to finish and binge read.. And the remaining ones Grand Ancestral Bloodline, Cultivation Chat Group these i totally dropped. I didn't enjoy reading further.. Cultivation online is a mess, the author wirtes great stories but his release schedule and behaviour of dropping novel kept me from continuing this novel any further. The last one Classless Assassin is still one of my favourite but the sad part is author Dropped the novel.
Rudransh_Vatsa:These are the names of those novels which i dropped in between.
anyone who's read oracle path and Providence knows what he is talking about . oracle path is the best story line wise novel I have ever read.
SujayPatra:Classless Ascension, Cultivation Chat Group, Paragon Of Sin, Grand Ancestral Bloodlines, Top Tier Providence, Supremacy Games, Oracle Paths, Cultivation Online... These are the novel im currently reading.. i didn't drop them atleast after reading till the latest chapter.