Review Detail of Golden_Butterfly in Chaos' Heir

Life is real, so is your story. You are taking your time setting up the characters. I didn't read the conversation. I heard them in my imagination. Is it just me or power systems seem a little hard to understand? Maybe because of current chapters. Character Development seems amazing with plot development. I can see what you did with Samuel is something that a professional author would do. At least for the current situation. Khan seems to inherit genes of the BoDS mc gene. I guess you can force it out someday for sure. Best of Luck Eve