Review Detail of Lm_Shaw in Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator

Overall, a very good story. Sometimes there are grammar or spelling mistakes, but those are easy to look over. Pacing is just a touch too fast, and sometimes the story jumps around a bit making it a touch confusing but not too bad. I have very much enjoyed this story so far and I am looking forward to this as it further develops. Only character I don't really like, is the yandere, they have no place in a harem. At least in my opinion.