Characters are very good, as far as non-human stories are concerned, if not slightly wooden. The mcs power level raises quite quickly but not too quickly and the only real issue for me is that the fl is called Benladann which I keep reading as Bin Ladin and that is more funny than anything else. Overall not bad.
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