Review Detail of Wolf_God in Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
Review detail
This story has a lot if potential and I really like where it's going just fron the first 2 chapters, but the grammar is subpar. If it was put through Grammerly it would skyrocket. Unfortunately, as it is now, I have no desire to continue reading. I really do think it's a good idea though.
Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
PancakesWitch
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Wolf_GodLv15Wolf_God
Really, then, would you let me edit it for you. Because in the first chapters you switch from 'him' to 'me' and 'I' quite a bit, but I understand if you like it as is. Thanks for replying to my review, a lot of authors don't do that.
PancakesWitch:i already put it through grammarly
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Wolf_God:Really, then, would you let me edit it for you. Because in the first chapters you switch from 'him' to 'me' and 'I' quite a bit, but I understand if you like it as is. Thanks for replying to my review, a lot of authors don't do that.