Poorly written and the characters are all one dimensional. The girls exist just to love writer's self insert. Made worse when said self insert isn't likeable at all
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LIKEFellbane:False. This fic is not poorly written in the slightest. The grammar and sentence structure are on point. The plot is a little frustrating as the interractions with the girls can be dragged out without confirming anything between them but thats it.
This review in my opinion is too rash. The novel doesn't deserve 1⭐ nor does it deserve all these 4-5⭐. The writing quality is good unlike most of the author on WN. The big problem is there's too many world with complex plot that are merged together so the plot that author is trying to create is messed up and rly bad. It's an FF so can't dream of having the exact personality of the girl from the original but if possible they should not be far and in this novel it was like it for some girls like Mia(in my opinion too tsundere). Also another bad points it's about the relationship between MC and girl, it's not well planned like he flirt and goes to too many girls without confirming his relation with the one he's right now. I recommend author to make a plan with how MC takes action before writing so that story not messed up.
Fellbane:False. This fic is not poorly written in the slightest. The grammar and sentence structure are on point. The plot is a little frustrating as the interractions with the girls can be dragged out without confirming anything between them but thats it.