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Review Detail of Xissaer in The Last Warlock

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Xissaer
XissaerLv112yrXissaer

This is constructive criticism. The title gives away the endig of the first story ark that we are stuck reading. We know MC will become the last warlock. 77 chapters in, he still struggles in his trials to gain the warlock legacy. The writing quality is superb. It is just increasingly boring because we know there the story is going. No suspense, no interest.

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The Last Warlock

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Xissaer
XissaerLv11Xissaer

Sorry for misspeling.

kommers
kommersAuthorkommers

Thanks for the feedback. Indeed a lot of readers complain about how long the first ark is. This is very spot on so no worries.