First of all: thanks a lot for writing this story ,I've been searching for a good yu-gi-oh fanfic for while and I certainly found gold! -frammar and narration are really good. I was surprised at how smoothly you were able to pull off duels. -the story is just started but already has a great dealing of direction and accomplishments and the MC part despite a main goal not being really established. -the character are a plus for me. The MC feels human instead of the usual genius while side character have all pretty realistic interaction (for yu-gi-oh that is). -the only area I find a bit lacking would be the world building: it seems to unite every time line of the different series into a single one and even if the MC doesn't seem to really care about how this world works I am really curious at how you, as the author, would fill the plot holes and stich together the 5+ series. Lastly thanks for your work, I had a blast reading and cannot wait for future updates!
Gearhawk
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