Review Detail of q00u in I Have A Martial Arts Panel

A very standard cultivate-until-you're-the-most-powerful-being story, but not a bad one. The ending felt a little sudden, but not as bad as other stories have been. Several elements were established and then forgotten about over time, as is common in these plan-as-you-go stories: * The girl who joined the demonic cult * His spiritual beast and everything related * The old man who sent him across the abyss sea So it's a bit scattershot. But it circles around to the beginning a little at the end, so there at least is a form of closure. I don't regret reading it. It's fast-paced, avoids some novel cliches, and the ending doesn't retroactively ruin everything, but the ending IS abrupt, and overall it treads familiar ground.