Review Detail of LordInsanity in Reincarnated as Emiya in Fate/kaleid [DROPPED]

Meh. Needlessly cringe, lots of spelling errors, annoying text format. Example: Name:"talking" instead of Name said "talking" or something similar, causes unnecessary confusion. Cringe because of the whole hidden identity thing, with the sheer two braincells you portrayed in the characters, you could have just came out with it infront of Miyu and had her back you up with it, or something similar. Most of the lines he says are cringe worthy, crying because his "dad" said something to him when he doesn't have the OG's memories and literally just became Shirou is stupid. It's very hard to read this fanfiction, there's too much cringe, I've read hundreds of fanfictions but rarely drop one just because of the cringe factor, well done author you have achieved something.