It's not a bad novel, but several points are left to be desired. On the one hand the MC is cruel for being cruel at times, at other times he is naive and silly. For example chapter 312 leaves a bad taste in the mouth, instead of getting caught he should have some self destruct matrix that takes all civilians and attackers to death along with his clone. Make something memorable out of it, he might die but the enemies will pay a high price. He spends most of the novel making plans that never work out because the inspector is omniscient and has a photographic memory. Giving plot armor to the MC's enemies doesn't seem to be the best choice. The sex scenes are repetitive, he uses the same sentences every time. Example: "he takes out his giant rod and..." It seems not very descriptive
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