Review Detail of Aeolius in Douluo Dalu: The Sovereign of Technology

I'll try my best so please give me a chance. Keep an open mind and be patient in reading the book since things take time. I want to age this book like fine wine and not spoiled milk. This is the fourth re write of the douluo dalu fanfiction I kept on trying to write. I'm older, more experienced and I listened to the advice the reader's of the past versions gave me. Enjoy.