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Please Update more. I noticed visible improvement in the names of the characters from DxD, as you misspelled some of the names at first, but went on to fix them. Overall, you made an extremely successful crossover, and well described and realistic(for the worlds of DxD and Remnant) situations in which(especially in Ruby's case) could be theoretically possible. You described the married life and reactions very well, and due to me not knowing the stability of updates, can only give you a 4.8. Please provide more chapters, and I can't wait to see how you continue the story!

The dance of the scarlet Dragon and the crimson Rose.(DxD X RWBY)

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