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The writing is as clean as bottled mineral water, pure and flows easily, something that only comes with years of practice. Helios is a fun MC, easy to connect and his mother is an absolute charmer. The story starts immediately and doesn't dilly dally. We do see some internal conflict in helios, and lil bit with his sis. I am only on chapter 4, so I am sure the author portrays or will portray the greater conflict in the future. The dialogues are awesome and on the best features of this story. We already see a lil of the world, and I believe there will be more of the mutant world in future. I sure will continue to follow this story. Thank you, author.

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I'm a Walking Disaster With My Unwanted Virginity

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thank you so much. and I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the critique too. I'll try my best to improve and hopefully this'll keep getting better.