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Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in I'm a Walking Disaster With My Unwanted Virginity

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At first I thought that his name was "Hello". XD that was really dumb for me. Anyway, all I can say is it was a fun read and entertaining. The title is weird and funny. The writing is okay and I know the author has his primary book participating the WSA, so having this book joining a new contest is understandble. All I can say is that the novel focuses more on "telling" and less "showing". It would be more entertaining if the chapters gets a full edit in the long run about the showing stuff and make it more engaging. Overall, 5/5!!!!

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I'm a Walking Disaster With My Unwanted Virginity

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thanks and I appreciate it. I'd be doing an edit soon. and hopefully this'll get better.