Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in DARK INFATUATION OF ROYAL LORDS

Interesting concept! I really like how the symbols added in each sentences and chapters brings vibrant imagery to the ironic fate that each character portrays (the cursed baby and the prince part is amazing). But I do think that some sentences needs editting, just like what I had mentioned from the comments. You also need to avoid using Ellipsis too often. Plus, you also need to capitalise every first letter when starting with a sentence. Kudos for the author!