Review Detail of Apple_Pi_9399 in Restarting Life As An Entity

Good story overall. the characters and development of story are going at a good pace and the main points of the story are clear and concise, straight to the point kind of thing but it does a good job at setting things up and giving context. Its pretty funny and has relatable esc characters. Really not bad but could could a little bit more of a description and a bit of explanation but overall it’s pretty good. Cant wait to see the rest of story as it progresses. d(-_^)