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As I'm not that great in writing I will just say what I think is annoying for a reader. This (Mom:,Dad:) it's annoying, you can improve by getting rid of it and use something else that will help readers to identify who speaks at the moment. That's all, I'm looking forward for your improvement.

Phoenix in MHA

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