Review Detail of DaoistLazyLife in Legacy of the Dark Sage

The story started off good, but the author seemed to lose direction after he reached the city. The story starts off as single perspective but changes to multiple perspective. I personally don't like multiple perspective, but even this seems excessive since I felt like MC became a background character. There was one point in which there were like 6 perspective shifts in a row separating the MCs perspective. For a character who is beloved by everyone, it seems incongruous that he is basically an asshole. The timeliness seems a bit off. Alot happens in the start of the story and it seems like it takes place over a few days if not weeks but we find out it all happens in one day. I mean, come on. Are you really trying to tell me that he is chased, escapes 1000 miles, is reported to the general, Is refound, fights for his life, knocks a woman unconscious by breaking her neck, she then wakes up, he is reported to the general again, the general sends a bounty to the Mercs, the mercs infiltrate an estate to find out what's going on, MC travels to a city, MC goes to Merc Hall and reveals his identity, Merc Hall calls president and he decides to help MC, Merc delegation goes to MC and negotiations fail, and he attack a tower of mages ... ... ... all in less than a day