I Would say this is decent, but you can definitely tell it was written by an amateur. The lead up to the first arc is way too long and I got bored with it. The preparation stage wasn’ t that great. You could have added some action or plot building but you really didn’t this is basically a fan fictio with an original storyline. The premise is good. The execution is meh.
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