Review Detail of Hoa_Nguyen_1369 in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

The plot is great, but the narrative is being stretch too hard. The author have a bad habit of over explaining every dialogs the characters made even the most simple one. Thus make the plot slower than it needed to be which could bored the reader and constrict reader imagination. I know everyone want to be descriptive to enrich the world, but it shouldn't overly abuse into damage a great novel. Cultivation Online also have slow plots that 1000 chapters accumulated only 6 months in the novel, but the narrative don't feel as slow.