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Review Detail of orlan_dela_peri in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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I don't know how to put this but...I kinda don't like the character of the MC and lilith, only in my own but not in the story itself, everything is perfect except the fact that the pace of their relationship is too fast and mc growth is too slow probably gonna take thousands of chapter if it has an ending. for someone who was been betrayed before got in relationship just for 2months, mc always over exaggerated when in/ comes to lilith, how could he trust someone he barely knew, in fact he really don't know anything about lilith, even her real name hasn't mention yet,then the phrase"you'll know when you become stronger" thing will show in every dialogue, well it's all part of the plot. The stone heart skill is the reason for the relationship, but mann really?

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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