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Item: Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Rating: 4

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I can appreciate details but this author takes way to long explaining things. I find myself skipping past multiple chapters. Action is slow. This has such great potential to be better than what it is. Still isn't bad but it doesn't keep my attention like cultivation online, my vampire system, dual cultivation etc. I have to take a break from this because it's so slow sometimes.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

XIETIAN

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Edit: At about chapter 420 all the constructive criticism I wrote about has significantly decreased. I do like how the author takes the time to explain things so it just doesn't seem like plot armor. Well done

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