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Review Detail of Leicchi in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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The story is good, and the exciting fighting scenes and complicated human emotions are well-expressed. The concept and its explanations were described excellently. However, there are instances when the author tends to overly describe things. Details are good, but too much will just make it look like fillers. Some scenes or paragraphs could have been described with fewer yet concise words, but it was written so long even if they didn't contribute to the story. For me, details are not everything, description and narration using few but concise words are more attractive.

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Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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