Review Detail of Hunter_Golay in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

I love this story. I’ve seen some criticism about the book that are actually true within this review section. But he takes and basically ignores it or makes fun of them or tells them they are wrong. That makes me think that this author doesn’t wanna improve or is just being childish. This book is amazing I won’t quit reading it bc it is an amazing book. The only problem is a repetition of phrases that are describing the picture. If it was a catch phrase for one of the characters that’s normal but using it to describe an image it’s not normal and on the level of a bad writer. Also OVER describing things which is a thing some people wont say it’s a thing but it is. Not everything needs a detailed description such as the color of a leaf for example or the color of the ground. And also describing things people see on a daily basis in a detailed manner. Also breaking up describing things into multiple paragraphs instead of focusing on describing it in one paragraph. I love this book I’m not gonna stop reading it I just want to be heard you’v acknowledged me before and we haven’t talked since.