Review Detail of ZeroHero in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

The overall writing quality is fairly good, yet there are frequent errors, they become less frequent and hinder the story less after chapter 80 ("Strong!" "Fast!" lol). The story development isn't that bad, it's fairly consistent in terms of pacing and moves quickly, yet not too quickly. However the author isn't consistent with things such as the actual threat level of things (has a bulletproof coat, bronze skin, and Lilith says guns are practically useless against first order beings, yet they get so scared of them). Everything always works out for the MC as well, and it never seems like anyone is ever near his level intellectually or in power. The author also tries to quantify speed, power, and distance, yet clearly underestimates many of these values as well. Character design is good, but the author neglects side characters a lot, and only tends to give them names, gender, height, and age. Updating stability is fine, and at least consistent. World Background is pretty good. When it comes to describing scenery, the author does a fantastic job, but when it comes to knowing facts about the world, the reader has to assume a lot. Overall, I would recommend this book as the fighting is pretty good, and the story isn't bad by any means. Although the characters aren't consistent enough, as the MC has a skill that changes him completely, yet he doesn't change in my opinion. He was a gangster before the apocalypse, and didn't mind killing people to ensure his survival, so I don't see how drastic his change was, although the skill should have made him more distant to others, it really didn't change him. Also, the trauma the MC carries with him isn't that traumatic. If you can get past the lack of depth to the characters and occasional grammar errors, then you may enjoy this book. (This is as of chapter 120)