world building, character development e.t.c is good. But the only problem is author needlessly tried to streach the story as much possible. I will rate the story 3 out of 5. Here is an example Spoiler- Look at ch202 he just said same thing colorfully with different words- "that after 1 month he met the condition to evolve the skill which he thought was impossible before 1 month". This single sentence streached to entire chp.
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