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Review Detail of TheArcher7 in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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TheArcher7
TheArcher7Lv122yrTheArcher7

The storytelling is very amateurish, there's some blatant fan service and casual sexism, but at least the MC is smart and the system mechanics are interesting. Reading up to chapter 36, I find the MC's rational decision making very refreshing. The game mechanic (where leveling up with soul energy sometimes rewards you with an item instead if there's excess) is creative in its own way. However the storytelling itself is amateurish. Small fights that we know the MC or another character will win are described instead of cut, allowing the plot to progress faster. There's also a lot of repetitive descriptions of characters that should also be cut. Tropes: Ice queen tsundere, a lot of hot blooded men, and OP dark lord MC himself. No arrogant young masters (yet). Also, Lilith could totally be cut out of the beginning. She's only there for comedic relief, fanservice, and to inform the MC of "things he would figure out eventually." Lastly, there is definitely some casual sexism, culture shocks, that people might not like.

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Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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Void_Guardian
Void_GuardianLv11Void_Guardian

Lilith is my religion leave her out of your review lol.

Ryuuto_Minagaru
Ryuuto_MinagaruLv11Ryuuto_Minagaru

It’s a story with a male lead, what’d you expect? The author not to describe how the love interests look?

Durgesh_Kumar_4012
Durgesh_Kumar_4012Lv11Durgesh_Kumar_4012

Author should surely describe the female lead, just that there is no need to describe it every 2-3 chapters and fill almost 1/3 to 1/5 of the chapter with these descriptions.

Ryuuto_Minagaru:It’s a story with a male lead, what’d you expect? The author not to describe how the love interests look?
Vandenberg
VandenbergLv11Vandenberg

KEEP LILITH'S NAME OUTA YOUR F'IN MOUTH

Void_Guardian:Lilith is my religion leave her out of your review lol.
Adam_Dante
Adam_DanteLv1Adam_Dante

*Slap

Vandenberg:KEEP LILITH'S NAME OUTA YOUR F'IN MOUTH
Transiunti
TransiuntiLv1Transiunti

If it is chinese novel, you can guarantee 100% sexism and racist. do not surprise

asdf_asdf_1820
asdf_asdf_1820Lv1asdf_asdf_1820

"The story is very amateurish". This is Webnovel where most writers are amateurs

deeejmx
deeejmxLv14deeejmx

Hence the word ”very”.

asdf_asdf_1820:"The story is very amateurish". This is Webnovel where most writers are amateurs
Kaishepard28
Kaishepard28Lv15Kaishepard28

I like Lilith but her being around so much at the beginning was not needed. still reading 200ish chapter and hope no harem

julo_1962
julo_1962Lv1julo_1962

so many simping for Lilith here lol