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Review Detail of Awuka in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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Awuka
AwukaLv32yrAwuka

This story would be one of the best that I have read, such as the apocalypse, if not ... (which I personally did not like) 1. The pace is too slow 2. The fact that Bing Xue is in the author's favorites. How she was able to block the first order zombies, with ease (chapters 20-30, I don't remember exactly). When Bing Xue went to the forest (chapters 91-93) there were a dozen Tier 1 creatures, but she was only attacked by 1 ... how ??? and she handled the snake without a scratch. And the fact that the author overestimates her statistics (so it seemed to me). 3. What is the meaning of evolution ??? the difference between lvl 24 and 26, 4 status points .. All praise towards Mc is pointless. A monster that has not yet been in the universe is nonsense. There is nothing special about Mc that matches Lilith's words. And right in the whole universe, there is no one better or like Mc. It sounds a little silly to me personally! Even with the downsides, the story is good - that's just my pathetic opinion.

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Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

XIETIAN

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Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

Are you just ignoring me, maybe because there is no answer ??

Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

there was a head-on collision. Bing Xue is an ordinary person, and zombies are of the 1st order. Even if the zombie is agility type, it should have more strength.

Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

I will not say that I do not like Bing Xue.

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Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

hahahaah you are funny. Are my comments meaningless? All my comments are factual. 1. Please explain to me how Bing Xue was able to block the zombies ?????? How did it happen that only a snake attacked her ????

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Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

I even liked it at first.

Awuka:I will not say that I do not like Bing Xue.
Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

Why doesn't Mc go looking for his parents? Are parents important to him? Are important. He became the first order, now he has enough strength to find them. And you do not need to write that he is recruiting survivors. Parents are more important than them, aren't they? Considering that his emotions were amplified, heart of stone. When will he find a family? in 100-300 chapters? Considering that the university left 100 chapters. Isn't the story slow?

Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

Why, everyone who fights with Tier 1 creatures comes out without a scratch. Considering that they are still inexperienced, even if they are talented, since only a week of the apocalypse has passed. okay with zombies, one zarapina and you are a corpse. There must be wounds. This is not a fairy tale, this is an apocalypse) ...... (Mc does not count)

Old_Axx
Old_AxxLv10Old_Axx

Seems like you really like the story even if you don't show it

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Smallfry
SmallfryLv1Smallfry

Another thing about Bing Xue is she was able to block the second-order, bear which I calculated to have roughly 600 strength, with a halberd mad with 30 mana, even though the bear was destroying stuff with far higher mana input easily before, also her background is garbage and makes no sense when relating to her character, honestly she is probably the worst character in terms of writing in the story. I also have to say, the author can't take criticism, I tried to ask him about those things I stated above, and he removed what I said after just replying "Nah" and "bye" to my comment.

XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthorXIETIAN

bye

Smallfry:Another thing about Bing Xue is she was able to block the second-order, bear which I calculated to have roughly 600 strength, with a halberd mad with 30 mana, even though the bear was destroying stuff with far higher mana input easily before, also her background is garbage and makes no sense when relating to her character, honestly she is probably the worst character in terms of writing in the story. I also have to say, the author can't take criticism, I tried to ask him about those things I stated above, and he removed what I said after just replying "Nah" and "bye" to my comment.
Smallfry
SmallfryLv1Smallfry

So you can't even debunk a plot-hole in your own story?

XIETIAN:bye
XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthorXIETIAN

Bye

Smallfry:So you can't even debunk a plot-hole in your own story?
Emo_Tion
Emo_TionLv14Emo_Tion

My Guy I`m not the Autor but you really need to chill, His Family is in the Direction behind the Baiquan Camp which he is Fighting currently to go look for his Family

Awuka:Why doesn't Mc go looking for his parents? Are parents important to him? Are important. He became the first order, now he has enough strength to find them. And you do not need to write that he is recruiting survivors. Parents are more important than them, aren't they? Considering that his emotions were amplified, heart of stone. When will he find a family? in 100-300 chapters? Considering that the university left 100 chapters. Isn't the story slow?
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

I like your response haha...

XIETIAN:Bye
Reading_System
Reading_SystemLv13Reading_System

He was weak even tough he was at the first order then.There are millions Zombies.3rd order Zombies even.So its understandeble.And the world diffrence between levels is because once you kill someone you get extra stats if your Level is not too much higher than them

Awuka:Why doesn't Mc go looking for his parents? Are parents important to him? Are important. He became the first order, now he has enough strength to find them. And you do not need to write that he is recruiting survivors. Parents are more important than them, aren't they? Considering that his emotions were amplified, heart of stone. When will he find a family? in 100-300 chapters? Considering that the university left 100 chapters. Isn't the story slow?
Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

Weak? He's strong enough to go looking, though what's the point in replying to people like you...

Reading_System:He was weak even tough he was at the first order then.There are millions Zombies.3rd order Zombies even.So its understandeble.And the world diffrence between levels is because once you kill someone you get extra stats if your Level is not too much higher than them
Reading_System
Reading_SystemLv13Reading_System

After the academy arc he literally is in a Life and Death that he is unlikely to win situation should he fight against one second order exictence

Awuka:Weak? He's strong enough to go looking, though what's the point in replying to people like you...
Awuka
AwukaLv3Awuka

I will tell you only one thing, please think wider. Bye.

Reading_System:After the academy arc he literally is in a Life and Death that he is unlikely to win situation should he fight against one second order exictence
Daoistwveffg
DaoistwveffgLv1Daoistwveffg

When the main character learned that the world was too powerful even for him, his first job should have been to go to his family, no need to argue why. The ragged title he had acquired after all implied that he was the most powerful creature on earth. so it's not necessarily wrong for people to point out the author's mistakes. I think what makes a good novel is its depth, and although there are other good things in this novel, it falls short on depth.

Reading_System:After the academy arc he literally is in a Life and Death that he is unlikely to win situation should he fight against one second order exictence