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[img=coins]I said, you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise it's a good story, especially your main character, in your tag you not put action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up.

Are you sure you are The Demon Lord?

SomnathYt

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It's my first Written, That's why I new in section, besides I am very weak in English that. But I continuously practice my writing. please support me in The Future as well, and please always tell me what I do wrong and what I need to work on. Thank you

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