Review Detail of acidic_sperm in The Villain's Light (BL)

I don't think the writing is bad, but the story and plot just isn't my thing y kno. It just doesn't seem very believable and I can't relate or agree with the way that the main characters think. Although I didn't read very far and things could get better, but I'm just isn't interested in it after a couple of chapters. It's hard to feel emotional when the emotional part is after very little background. Specifically when the Rhash meets Reif. It's hard to believe he loves a character in a book that much from the very little world building.