Review Detail of ImNex in Skeksmwm
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I need to be honest here so... this is my review. Your writing quality surpasses many so no need to question. 5 stars. You're uploading frequently so 5 stars.(atleast until chap 5 latest chapter) I don't know about the future but I hope you don't drop like many other authors after chapter 10 lol. Character Design is abit tricky. Your mc is a boxer and a coach in his last life with a wife and some kids. when he reincarnated in Pokemon. How does he know who nurse joy is? I know who said nurse joy looks like a game character blah blah but like... can you describe it little bit more vivid? Also how MC said he will tell the parents later that he is a grown man inside their kid's body? Don't. Bad idea. Even if it's not me, when your fanfic becomes bigger and bigger more audience will be attracted and I doubt they'll be like "Yay mc is telling his past lives' memories to his parents. Such a new and refreshing logical idea, author san!". I didn't want to give it 3 stars. That's too harsh. But you're not getting 5 for this. SO 4 stars for character design. World background is not even needed. It's Pokemon world and since the fanfic is in the embryo stage, original background has not been established so Stars- N/A I look forward to seeing your success.
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Thanks for the review, for one the MC isn’t the coach he is just the illegal boxer. But you are right about how I didn’t explain about how MC knew about Pokemon enough, so I’ll probably go back and edit Chapter 5 to clear that up a little. Also, I don’t think I said MC would tell his parents about his past life. But if I did, you don’t need to worry because that definetly is not happening, 😈
IQjfjwefn:Thanks for the review, for one the MC isn’t the coach he is just the illegal boxer. But you are right about how I didn’t explain about how MC knew about Pokemon enough, so I’ll probably go back and edit Chapter 5 to clear that up a little. Also, I don’t think I said MC would tell his parents about his past life. But if I did, you don’t need to worry because that definetly is not happening, 😈
I look forward to what's gonna happen next. I don't wanna pressure you but I wanna read more of your fanfic lol.
IQjfjwefn:Oh nevermind, I did say that he would explain it in the future. But keep reading and you will find that he wont be explaining it lol